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Post by Kiro_of FBComics on Aug 21, 2006 22:40:48 GMT -5
::Opening::  A comedy? What a concept. Okay folks. I'm gonna try to help my friend Selmo out. (or rather he is helping me) I'm gonna be working on the comic First Bloodshed which will be exclusively hosted by Selmo.org. Even though I want to post it on my myspace. I decided instead to have a link to Selmo.org if people want to read my comic. Which means.. more people!! Wee. So I'm gonna post the first sketch of the comic here, please tell me what you think, of the comic and of my idea as a whole. Here is issue_1 concept sketch:  ::Closing:: I WANT TO KNOW WHAT YOU THINK... fools.  |
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Post by kcinthegreat on Aug 21, 2006 23:04:55 GMT -5
FLAME: I had a dream like that once. You can guess how I woke up that morning. At least I know I'm not the only one now! That racoon was such a turn on!
HONESTY:Great start! Your drawing skill is fantastic. You could probably use the computer more to touch things up and make them a little bit smoother (Mostly text). And on a final note it needs a bit more story. Normally first comics are introductions of characters. This looks like it wouldn't be a first comic but maybe a 3rd or 4th maybe even a 20th. Just suggesting to introduce your characters a little but...and not just their dark sexxxy sides.
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Post by Selmo on Aug 21, 2006 23:06:15 GMT -5
wow Kcin-san provided constructive criticism well done!
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Post by Kiro_of FBComics on Aug 21, 2006 23:08:20 GMT -5
AWESOME you're honest and know what you are talking about. Loves it.
Okay, to start.. I didnt edit this, cause its a concept. Lol. I have a better technique for getting it to look nice, ask Selmo. I think he will back me up on that.
As for the intro thing. Im not sure about the depth of the characters yet. So.. I'll start thinking. I was mostly going for randomness, so lets see if I can't pull it together some ^^
Thanks again
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Post by kcinthegreat on Aug 21, 2006 23:11:10 GMT -5
One final suggestion...PUT ME IN IT!!!! Selmo and I can both be in it as like super warrior goats or something like that! At least a cameo or two!
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Post by Kiro_of FBComics on Aug 21, 2006 23:13:38 GMT -5
Ask and you shall recieve. The point of me having the comic on here is to get ideas. So don't worry We can work on something. Let me get it started first. ^^
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Post by Selmo on Aug 21, 2006 23:14:14 GMT -5
lol dibs on have a david bowie sized package!
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Post by burninator on Aug 22, 2006 3:44:04 GMT -5
Nice comic, i liked it. And no one can pull off the David Bowie package. that thing is exclusive.
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Post by kcinthegreat on Aug 22, 2006 9:11:13 GMT -5
You just need 4 rocks, 2 sticks and a head full of ego! OWNED!
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Post by Selmo on Aug 22, 2006 11:46:39 GMT -5
dude he had a pretty nice mullet to....i dont even know it it could be classified as a mullet it was like...super mullet of doom
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Post by wnorcus on Aug 22, 2006 13:51:08 GMT -5
i best be in it as like fan service
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Post by Kiro_of FBComics on Aug 22, 2006 21:17:06 GMT -5
i best be in it as like fan service I don't even know who the fuck you are... |
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Post by kcinthegreat on Aug 22, 2006 22:18:11 GMT -5
I don't even know who the fuck you are... Me neither who the hell is that?! Santa?? |
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Post by Kiro_of FBComics on Aug 22, 2006 23:34:24 GMT -5
I really have no idea.  |
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Post by Selmo on Aug 23, 2006 1:54:15 GMT -5
yeah their email is sorta vague appenetly they are a vampire
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